Many people today are worried about ‘cybercrime’ such as hacking and identity theft.
What problems does ‘cybercrime’ cause, and what solutions can you suggest for ordinary people
and businesses to take?
Along with computer science progress, committing a crime through Internet space has brought to the public concern as an ever- increasing thread. Considering the complexity of web operation, thieves remain unknown for a long time.
Cybercrimes lead to a myriad of issues including economic as well as social problems. A hacked bank account as an example, if done by a person who usually achieve its aim through implementing a fishing programme, could have a devastating outcomes for the account-holder. According to the media, that is not a rare event these days. Furthermore, information thieves may have the capability to break into profiles of social media users in order to steal personal and secret information which are not supposed to be disclosed by the owner. Private data could be used against anyone to be exchanged for money in return.
As solutions several methods can be proposed. The most efficient way to combat against this misbehaviour is boosting public awareness about hacker’s action plans. Having people educated as mentioned before could prevent those who seek access to other’s precious information from reaching their goal. Secondly, installing potent and up-to-date antivirus software on any computer which keeps and runs valuable data, can easily deter criminals from stealing worthy information. Finally, avoid working on sensitive applications, such as bank apps in a non-secure and public spaces could be a vital tip for all Internet users.
Overall, although criminals of cyber spaces apply a variety of techniques to obtain information, having said above, I believe that improving public awareness, using powerful antivirus software and working in a secure Internet rooms should be applied as effective weapon to fight against these crimes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 616, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ne to be exchanged for money in return. As solutions several methods can be propos...
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Line 4, column 301, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e weapon to fight against these crimes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45289855072 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8813506884 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68115942029 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0711888869 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.769230769 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.077171701589 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0285673987097 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0249801724897 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0382174030364 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032418783506 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.51 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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