Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that teen-hood is the delighted time of majority people's life, while others deem that though there are more responsibilities in adult life, it bestows more joy. Teenagers live tension-free life due to fewer responsibilities and it is a crucial period because it decides a person's career path, whereas as mature humans have freedom of living according to their desire as well as they have more responsibilities to perform.
On the one hand, some individuals reckon that teenage is the best period of life as during that time they do not have to bother about anything. This is because teenagers have to focus on their studies and they are not bounded by any duties. Consequently, stress-free life can be lived during teen-hood. In addition to that, it has significant important in every people's life because future life depends on the decisions made in teenage-hood. Children are surrounded by many people who pamper them with unconditional love and care. However, adult life has also its own perquisites which cannot be neglected.
On the other hand, adulthood is the phase when people have independence of choice and they live as per their own convenience without any interpretation from others. That is to say that,despite greater responsibilities in adult life, they can make their decision unlike teenagers who have to take permission from their parents before making choice. Moreover, in adulthood, a person does not only has to take care of their family, but they also has to maintain an equilibrium between profession and personal life. Hence, I personally deem that adult life is happier than teenage life.
To recapitulate, by agglomerating above mention factors, it can be concluded that although life is less stressful in teenage years, I think that adults life renders freedom of living which is more pivotal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
..., it has significant important in every peoples life because future life depends on the...
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Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , despite
...etation from others. That is to say that,despite greater responsibilities in adult life,...
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Line 5, column 396, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...r, in adulthood, a person does not only has to take care of their family, but they ...
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Line 5, column 444, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...ake care of their family, but they also has to maintain an equilibrium between prof...
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Line 7, column 146, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adults'' or 'adult's'?
Suggestion: adults'; adult's
...tressful in teenage years, I think that adults life renders freedom of living which is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, while, as to, i think, in addition, as well as, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14333333333 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98317318006 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2455522677 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.692307692 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9230769231 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212488825662 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859345218141 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516453231138 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14232150126 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0138486039911 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.