Many young people are leaving their homes in rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons?
Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?
The youth of this generation is more dynamic and independent when it comes to living with families. Most of the youngsters leave their homes in small towns and shift to metropolitan cities in search of quality education, employment opportunities and higher income. It is agreed that this trend has more merit factors than its demerits.
Many parts of rural localities do not qualify to accommodate a good quality lifestyle. Intermittent infrastructure, low-quality education and lack of awareness about the growth opportunities are a few of the factors that marginalize these areas. Moreover, the societies in those areas are divided into emotional or cultural values and are not concerned about the progressive economy and overall improvement of the society. Also, lesser importance is given by government bodies in terms of development when compared to bigger cities. Issues like irregular electric power supply, low-speed internet connections and lesser options of commuting have been keeping these areas from providing a fast-paced life.
On the other hand, ambitious youngsters of these areas tend to relocate to the cities to find opportunities that are not available in their hometown. Many teenagers apply in reputed colleges or universities for their higher education which will eventually land them either a thriving job or a profitable business. In the meantime, it is also easier to find a part-time work in the metro cities which helps students in managing their petty expenses. This also reduces a part of the financial burden for their hard earning families.
To conclude, it is beneficial for people to move to the cities early and explore the chances for a better lifestyle, education and income. This practice passively relieves the struggle of people in small towns too.
The youth of this generation is more dynamic and independent when it comes to living with families. Most of the youngsters leave their homes in small towns and shift to metropolitan cities in search of quality education, employment opportunities and higher income. It is agreed that this trend has more merit factors than its demerits.
Many parts of rural localities do not qualify to accommodate a good quality lifestyle. Intermittent infrastructure, low-quality education and lack of awareness about the growth opportunities are a few of the factors that marginalize these areas. Moreover, the societies in those areas are divided on emotional or cultural values and are not concerned about the progressive economy and overall improvement of the society. Also, lesser importance is given by government bodies in terms of development when compared to bigger cities. Issues like irregular electric power supply, low-speed internet connections and lesser options of commuting have been keeping these areas from providing a fast-paced life.
On the other hand, ambitious youngsters of these areas tend to relocate to the cities to find opportunities that are not available in their hometown. Many teenagers apply in reputed colleges or universities for their higher education which will eventually land them either a thriving job or a profitable business. In the meantime, it is also easier to find part-time work in the metro cities which helps students in managing their petty expenses. This also reduces a part of the financial burden for their hard earning families.
To conclude, it is beneficial for people to move to the cities early and explore the chances for a better lifestyle, education and income. This practice passively relieves the struggle of people in small towns too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 41.998997996 195% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3041.0 1615.20841683 188% => OK
No of words: 565.0 315.596192385 179% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38230088496 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87542086881 4.20363070211 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93428161815 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.300884955752 0.561755894193 54% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 977.4 506.74238477 193% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0721442886 174% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2514894922 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.607142857 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1785714286 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.46428571429 7.06120827912 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 24.0 8.67935871743 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19173643865 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581225447359 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307304096674 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988270106513 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187834790132 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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