Now-a-days media plays a vital role in our society because they gather information from worldwide with respect to different regions. It can also be said that people believe that data presented by the channels whether it is true of false. I personally accept that it rely on situation along with mentality of the other person who receives it also it is not not so good to gain from it.
There are various uses that depicts why people are more interested in famous people. One of them is because of their fashion, their craze in society. For instance, SharuKhan is from a middle-class family before as an actor, however he is respected by his fans by his acting nature inspite of his family background. Another case in point is lifestyle, most of the people got attracted by a person's dressing sense, such as branded clothing. It can be seen that despite of fame and status most of the celebrities are known by their luxurious lifestyle.
Media has a different impact on public. It focus on people not only because of their richness and appearance but also on various range of living style of everyone. It is often said that media fades away the privacy of people by telecasting certain photos and videos. This fascinates public to discuss about that point in different views. However, media people could misrepresent the facts in-order to make news and information more exciting but this action may significantly rui someone's reputation and make lifestyle miserable.
To conclude, while presenting someone's information for positive consequences are considerable, Moreover one should have privacy for some things regardless of their social position.
- The charts below give information about world's spending, world's population and consumption of resources.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 11
- The media is increasing interest in famous people who have ordinary backgrounds. Why do you think people are interested in the lives of famous people? Do you think this is a good thing? 78
- Percentage of UK people who consumed daily recommended amount of fruit and vegetable in 2002, 2006 and 2010.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.You should spend about 20 minutes on thi 78
- The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- Children over 15 years should be allowed to take their own decision without any interference from Their parents. Do you agree or disagree? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: not
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Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'focuses', 'focusses'?
Suggestion: focuses; focusses
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, such as, it is true, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0695970696 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74350415806 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611721611722 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4899147698 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8571428571 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187287622176 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628719156158 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684155579737 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939794541276 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463337821023 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.