The media is increasing interest in famous people who have ordinary backgrounds. Why do you think people are interested in the lives of famous people? Do you think this is a good thing?
in this day and age ,there is a growing interest on famous people's lives specially from the media.people are really engrossed on how infamous people live before their fame , i personally hold the idea that this notion is not necessarily efficient and positive fore the society.
there are few arguments on why people are so invested on this subject.firstly,this extra information makes the celebrities more approachable in the public eye therefore some believe by knowing their life story people can actually relate to them as an ordinary person and moreover think that achieving this kind of life...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16975308642 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0319107573 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552469135802 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 81.0 20.2975951904 399% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 246.274237386 49.4020404114 499% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 418.75 106.682146367 393% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 81.0 20.7667163134 390% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 36.25 7.06120827912 513% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225533014704 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1502657335 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874778711166 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1502657335 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874778711166 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 43.4 13.0946893788 331% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -19.2 50.2224549098 -38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.44779559118 259% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.1 11.3001002004 319% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.89 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.55 8.58950901804 134% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 34.4 10.1190380762 340% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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