The media should limit how much bad news they report because it discourages people from doing activities which usually involve very little risk.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Media is a <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-177024624DBD41181DBD5DA5CC179CC1" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_297" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="very " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">very </pwa>powerful tool that highlights the working of any society. It not only throws light on the social, economic and political lives of the people but also influences it in various ways. Nowadays, several news channels exaggerate the bad information which can cause a detrimental effect on the minds of the people and suppress them from performing certain tasks. However, the question arises, is this a positive or negative development?
In my strong perspective, media <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-3E854CFA329B1B33B0773FD032E8A5F7" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_465" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="certainly " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">certainly </pwa>magnifies the critical information and causes a flawed impact on the thinking of the <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-FF45494F8B8704DD87872DC7D3C36611" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_2538" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="general " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">general </pwa>public. My opinion <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-12943B8D8BE4B00FCAA897D10B042162" data-pwa-rule-id="null" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-dictionary-word="is supported" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">is supported</pwa> by a few noticeable reasons. To begin with, glorifying the news of particular places will decline their status symbol and people will not feel secure visiting those locations. <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-45B54B29ADE629BA6E82CDC83B6EE5CB" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_814" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: Tourism" data-pwa-suggestions="Tourism" data-pwa-dictionary-word="Consequently, tourism" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">Consequently, tourism</pwa> will also perish, which <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-AC041215AEA61EB2AA661ABD0AA67EAD" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_210" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="in turn " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">in turn </pwa>is a huge loss to the economy of that nation.
Another drawback of this approach which undoubtedly does not <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-50CBB575FFFA09B5CE15ECD6B5383782" data-pwa-rule-id="DID_BASEFORM" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'make'" data-pwa-suggestions="make" data-pwa-dictionary-word="makes" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">makes</pwa> it a preferable one is the emergence of racial hatred among communities. Communication media can arise communal tensions by overemphasizing the negative points of one group. This can further cease the talks between the mixed ethnic groups leading to the feeling of bitterness among them. <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-8A7F835D3AE154AECE8B0A147B788467" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_814" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: The" data-pwa-suggestions="The" data-pwa-dictionary-word="Moreover, the" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">Moreover, the</pwa> amplified news <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-888ADB124A645978D89BF43F6429A5C3" data-pwa-rule-id="null" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-dictionary-word="is also assumed" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">is also assumed</pwa> to have deleterious effects on children. These young buds have a developing mind which can <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-8DB0AB2F2D29B909D07C3D890B6A7D25" data-pwa-rule-id="null" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-dictionary-word="be shaped" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">be</pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-8DB0AB2F2D29B909D07C3D890B6A7D25" data-pwa-rule-id="null" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-dictionary-word="be shaped" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done"> shaped</pwa> in whichever way we want and showing bad information can weaken their perspective towards various communities.
My conjecture <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-9FD4444333C24A758C9BA681BCAAE5E5" data-pwa-rule-id="null" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-dictionary-word="is further bolstered" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">is further bolstered</pwa> upon by another unavoidable fact that the showcasing of the undesirable content to the viewers can <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-35F7B5F3845C3998C00E77D4535333F3" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_1103" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: cause" data-pwa-suggestions="cause" data-pwa-dictionary-word="result in" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">result in</pwa> the migration from that specific area. Those who will not feel secure living in the crime-stricken area would not take any risk and prefer to <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-3A80D941B7E205D91541700F6B7CD675" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_2081" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: move" data-pwa-suggestions="move" data-pwa-dictionary-word="relocate" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">relocate</pwa> to some safer locations. To illustrate my notion, in 2018, <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-8A761332F554794BF344A257F912BA35" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="I observed a mass exodus of people~we observed a mass exodus of people~they observed a mass exodus of people" data-pwa-dictionary-word="a mass exodus of people was observed" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">a mass exodus of people </pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-8A761332F554794BF344A257F912BA35" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="I observed a mass exodus of people~we observed a mass exodus of people~they observed a mass exodus of people" data-pwa-dictionary-word="a mass exodus of people was observed" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">was observed</pwa> in Syria following the news of communal tensions.
To encapsulate, all the above-stated reasons and my proposed examples <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-9DDDF3957466C21F017338330C3E4906" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_212" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="clearly " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">clearly </pwa>justify my belief that, media should limit their coverings for the betterment of their countrymen.
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| 2019-07-29 | Shahla | 84 | view |
| 2019-07-12 | gursangeet | 11 | view |
- Reading fiction books, such as short stories and novels is more fun than watching motion pictures. Do you agree or disagree? 11
- some people believe that the government should not spend too much money on outer space exploration. Do you agree or disagree? 89
- Nowadays children mostly spend time playing computer games rather than sports. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or a negative development? 73
- The media should limit how much bad news they report because it discourages people from doing activities which usually involve very little risk.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 11
- Some people think that the government should pay one of the parents of very young children to stay at home to look after their children.What do you think would be the advantages and disadvantages of this policy?Give reasons for your answer and include any 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, moreover, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 41.998997996 174% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 7895.0 1615.20841683 489% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 687.0 315.596192385 218% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 11.4919941776 5.12529762239 224% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 5.11963717896 4.20363070211 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 13.5490346822 2.80592935109 483% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 299.0 176.041082164 170% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.435225618632 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 2150.1 506.74238477 424% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 3.1 1.60771543086 193% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 221.224935806 49.4020404114 448% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 328.958333333 106.682146367 308% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 28.625 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0131029285575 0.244688304435 5% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0165843723353 0.084324248473 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0248381752325 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0172409450073 0.151304729494 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0133648488002 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 47.0 13.0946893788 359% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -83.84 50.2224549098 -167% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.9 11.3001002004 282% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 49.95 12.4159519038 402% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 201.0 78.4519038076 256% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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