Some people think that the government should pay one of the parents of very young children to stay at home to look after their children.
What do you think would be the advantages and disadvantages of this policy?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Children are the backbone of our nation, who not only reflect its present, but also portray a picture of its forthcoming years. These young buds should be nourished and nurtured in the best way possible. Government can play a quintessential role in their upbringing by ensuring financial aid to offspring’s parent. Indubitably, such initiative is capable of bringing a plethora of benefits that are as under mentioned.
The first and the foremost reason to support young parents, is that of a lesser dependency on health care facilities eventually benefitting the government. This is due to the fact that maintaining a work-life balance becomes even more gruelling, when there is a child to be taken care of. Consequently, their health suffers and they consume medical services more, which otherwise can be avoided by taking a break from work by one of the parents. Moreover, there is no need to appoint a care taker which further proves economical.
Apart from the health of parents, positive effects on child’s development cannot be denied. Children grow, both physically as well as psychologically sound under their parent’s supervision as they receive immense love. Furthermore, it also reduces the chance of abuse and harassment by any other guardian thereby ensuring a safe environment.
Like every coin has two sides, such agendas have a few shortcomings as well. Primarily, government has a plethora of allocations, ranging from education to defence, employment to safety , which require an ample amount of finance. So, financial aid can act as a burden and also might hinder the functioning of other domains. In addition to this, there is a high risk involved with the funds being misused. Not only this, once a child learns to be in the company of a loved one, a sudden shock or trauma may follow, if a parent decides to start working again.
To encapsulate, financial help can undoubtedly influence the life of a pupil as well his family but, government needs to set certain regulations so that it can not be exploited.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, apart from, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12202380952 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0401922165 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633928571429 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.386087765 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.235294118 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7647058824 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138336521931 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395988713118 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298264953071 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0718374870186 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219363831371 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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