Men do most of the high-level jobs. Should the government encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women?
What is your opinion on that?
Use your own knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
You should write at least 250 words.
There is no doubt that today high-level jobs are dominated by men. However, women also have proved their mattle at helm of hierarchy and are successful too. To encourage women empowerment it is essential that women do get some of the reservation in job. this essay will advocate my opinion.
On the one hand, high-level jobs requires extreme level of commitment, work pressure and attention. The men are considered more capable of handling this issues and find more opportunities than women in top brass of any industry. Secondly, women has to cop-up with family expectation along with the job pressure which will make difficult for them to achieve proper work-life balance. this may lead to a disturbed family life and cause extreme stress which may disturb their health as well.
On the other hand, In this men dominant society, today women are getting equal opportunities for education, skill empowerment and eventually getting job in their are of expertise. Their efforts demonstrate their achievement. For an example, CEO of Pepsico, Ms. Indra Nue, is one of top 50 COE list published by the Forbse magazine. Moreover, today, women are braking the barriers to reach at key positions in private as well as government sector.For an instance, Ms.Sitaram , the defence minister of INDIA is well know for her roll in securing the indian citizen. In addition to this, the government of many countries are focusing in upbringing in women's role in society by providing them ample opportunities to justify this notion of belief that their contribution is important in development of any nation. For an instance, the Gulf countries, like UAE has allowed women officers in their police force and these women have proved them self by their duties and committment.
To conclude, women are also the play the pivotal role in development of any nation and they should get equal opportunities as men are getting. the reservation in job for women is highly acceptable and advantageous step if goverment enforce such policy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as to, in addition, no doubt, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11178247734 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8173456467 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570996978852 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4853242141 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.75 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6875 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181293016382 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671888519759 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502034737984 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128720136801 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335011111182 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.