Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Generally, sport have been becoming as a business than a physical activity for recent decades. There is a debatable matter whether high cost contract of sportsmen is fair or not. This essay will discus both sides of argument but from my point of view, I find this huge expenses for athletic contractions is prejudice.
In one hand, people who are advocated of astronomical cost persist that being a profession athletic should be consider as a career and it should make money as much as a dream job. In addition, they justify high amount of money by the notion of limited age. To dig a little deeper, there is an upper age for being a talented athletic so that beyond that an athletic get weaker and could not be efficient day in, day out. For instance, the limited age is forty due to in upper ages the athletics can not run or jump for ninety minutes. So sportsmen should deposit plenty of money during their playing years for the rest of their lives.
On the other hand, some people claim that there are a lot of other jobs in society that need more hard working that sports while they earn much less. One of these demanding jobs is being a teacher. Being a superb teacher needs much more efforts and some other human traits such as being extra tolerant, benevolent nature and so on that they are some time frustrating while based on statistics teacher's wages are placed in the bottom of wages list. Another argue in favor of this idea is that when money steps in sport so that plays magnificent role by passing days, the brutally honest of sports and also its key virtues will be spoiled. They believe that being an athletic should be consider as an extra job so that its transcendent goals will be preserved. The last but not least, This tremendous amount of money makes sportsmen to be arrogant and self superiority and unfortunately there are several concrete evidences that show after a while athletics will be reluctant to train to do their best.
In conclusion, from my perspective, make a contraction with astronomical numbers is undeserved and it should be coequal with others careers in society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6747311828 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50249470858 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543010752688 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3366862907 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.933333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149303023839 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548814096547 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584205218783 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804402838908 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407880422206 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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