The demands for private means of transportation for traveling is rapidly growing among modern people. Initially, this essay will suggest that the biggest causes of the phenomenon are poor public transit and comfort zone of living standard and then argue that changes in the environment and financial burden are the most detrimental ramifications.
To begin with, the foremost reason the travel by personal vehicles is that generally public transportations are considered as an over-crowded, non-availability of flexible hours, heavy fare and so forth. As a result, people prefer the safest, easiest and affordable way of traveling through their own source of transport. For instance, a survey conducted recently by BBC News has revealed that 55% of the world population are using their automobiles to commute and other purposes. Moreover, governments and private financial institutes are offering numerous vehicle loan options to society. Consequently, most individuals buy their desired vehicles with the provided loan. Therefore, various reasons enhance the community to use their own vehicles.
As a consequence, it can never be denied that this tendency could have some negative effects on the community. Firstly, the pollution level is rising due to exhaust foam and noise which are generated by cars or motorbikes. Thus, global warming is becoming a serious concept in today's epoch. Secondly, the car loan facility with less interest rate attract consumers in the beginning but later they realize financial helpless owing to pay monthly instalments to bank from a limited budget. Accordingly, they may fail to secure themselves and their family's future in an appropriate manner. For example, most middle-class employees are committed suicide in the last
year because they could not afford the credit pressure. Hence, having own automobile become a serious problem for the nation.
To conclude, less developed public transportation and financial supports are enhancing folk to use private means of transportation for travelling. However, steps should be taken to change this trend as the drawbacks of this are clear, with potentially dangerous outcomes for society and individual as a whole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44213649852 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87838416556 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635014836795 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 337.0 20.2975951904 1660% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1834.0 106.682146367 1719% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 337.0 20.7667163134 1623% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 181.0 7.06120827912 2563% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241839644008 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.241839644008 0.084324248473 287% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127676330157 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566875829166 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 172.7 13.0946893788 1319% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -279.04 50.2224549098 -556% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 135.9 11.3001002004 1203% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.75 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 25.88 8.58950901804 301% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 63.0 9.78957915832 644% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 136.8 10.1190380762 1352% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 63.0 10.7795591182 584% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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