FOR MORE AND MORE PEOPLE, WEARING FASHIONABLE CLOTHES HAS BECOME VERY IMPORTANT. IS THIS ATTITUDE TO WEARING FASHIONABLE CLOTHES A POSITIVE OR A NEGATIVE DEVELOPMENT?
Some individuals claim that being fashionable is important, particularly in choosing clothes. This is because they put the appearance as a paramount value in their life. According to my experiences, knowledge and exposure, I strongly believe that it is a healthy development and following are some of the reasons for me to think so.
Wearing good and fashionable clothes is a positive attitude. Looking good and feeling good about oneself is a sign of healthy mind. To be an important as well as notable in a positive way through dressing in a fashionable way is the right of every individual. It should not be at risk of your comfort.
Fashionable or branded stuff should be within reach of your expenditure capability. It should not risk your money intended for other important life commodities. Being dressed in a fashionable way make you look impressive, confident with high self-esteem and moreover at comfort to move in a society in an inspirational manner.
Being fashionably dressed also has a good effect on others in positive way. People will become attracted easily, your ideas or opinions will be heard readily and your personality will capture minds for quite sometime. Fashionable dressing should not be to bring someone down who could not afford. It should be intended to display oneself in a descent and distinguished way. A white rose is prominent among red and vice versa.
In conclusion, wearing or dressed in a fashionable way enhances various aspects of your personality including choices, confidence level, conspicuousness, well differentiated and also makes you trendy. So it is a positive development being dressed in a fashionable way.
- you have been sent an important document in a foreign language and you need it translated quickly. you have a friend who knows this language.Write a letter to your friend and ask him/her to translate an important document you have received. In your letter 73
- sporting and cultural events can help in minimizing the tension among different nations. discuess 61
- The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries. 61
- Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. 78
- Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 294, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...a healthy development and following are some of the reasons for me to think so. Wearing ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
.... To be an important as well as notable in a positive way through dressing in a fashionable way i...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a fashionable way" with adverb for "fashionable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...able in a positive way through dressing in a fashionable way is the right of every individual. It sh...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a fashionable way" with adverb for "fashionable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...portant life commodities. Being dressed in a fashionable way make you look impressive, confident wit...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an inspirational manner" with adverb for "inspirational"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...oreover at comfort to move in a society in an inspirational manner. Being fashionably dressed also has ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 35, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a fashionable way" with adverb for "fashionable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...a. In conclusion, wearing or dressed in a fashionable way enhances various aspects of your person...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 248, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a fashionable way" with adverb for "fashionable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...is a positive development being dressed in a fashionable way.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2037037037 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14697363712 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0335669382 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6470588235 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8823529412 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58823529412 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197472734534 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773448449177 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932179602938 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12088803364 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388648615504 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.