More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine.
Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countries are stealing from poor countries. Others feel that this is only part of the natural movement of workers around the world.
Do you agree or disagree?
In this era of globalization, it is inevitable that the humans tend to look out for more opportunities all over the world rather than being restricted to their domestic country. There has been an upcoming debate as to whether the qualified workers are migrating to more prosperous countries in order to upgrade their lifestyle or the richer countries are stealing the skillful class of poor countries. As far as I believe, it is an individual decision and a natural outcome of qualified workers all over the globe.
To embark upon, the qualified people having academic excellence in fields such as engineering, computing and medicine would always want to explore their skills at the most higher level. If their domestic country is poor and would not be able to suffice with the resources, there is no chance but to migrate to a better developed country. For instance, under developed countries where agriculture is the main occupation will obviously lack in high-end technological advancements ultimately directing the skilled workers towards the economically strong countries.
Moreover, it all varies as per the individual outlook towards their career growth where higher qualification undoubtedly demands advanced opportunities. There is also a possibility that these workers could gain skill and experience and then practically apply and upgrade their own country with the advanced knowledge. Hence, making the poor country to improve technologically and gain overall economic development.
Conspicuously, due to globalization there is ease in migration of skilled workforce of a under developed country to a much advanced country resulting it to be a natural phenomenon. All in all, it is crucially important to make the move for better lifestyle and expansion of their own growth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...ntry. There has been an upcoming debate as to whether the qualified workers are migrating to ...
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Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'higher' (without 'most') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: higher
...ays want to explore their skills at the most higher level. If their domestic country is poo...
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Line 7, column 88, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...se in migration of skilled workforce of a under developed country to a much advan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, moreover, so, then, as to, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42142857143 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10378307679 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.7850645164 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167980084712 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667354345589 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539088238135 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10314129986 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320190704762 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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