Write about the following topic.
Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
People have differing views with regards to advertising. While I accept that it sometimes can help us to make a decision to buy something, I believe that its drawbacks overweigh benefits.
On the one hand, we could learn and know a completely new product from a variety of advertising media, such as television, internet, and posters. Sometimes we may find it useful to help us to improve the quality of our life. For example, people did not know anything about electric toothbrush when it was introduced to China several years ago. If we did not see any kinds of advertisements about this new thing, we would not know that these electric toothbrushes could make your teeth cleaner and more health, and would not choose to buy it.
On the other hand, People always buy something that they finally find it is useless. In order to draw attention from customers, many businesses tend to display too much about a product’s beneficial qualities rather than its real qualities. As a result, most customers would be attracted by these kinds of ads as advertisers can always catch people’s interest. Toy ads, For example, are described as being extremely interesting and enjoyable, and most parents would spend money on their children. Many toys they buy due to attractive ads will be eventually found less fun.
In conclusion, it seems to me that in order to make people buy their products, many businesses and advertisers exaggerate and mislead. In this way, they will lose more and more customers in the near future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, may, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93385214008 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76282128012 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603112840467 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9092404717 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5384615385 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210288507957 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702592617403 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431375233676 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113445455198 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607450559041 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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