There is no doubt that exercise plays a crucial role in human life. Some people believe that in order to motivate them to workout depicting sports events such as Olympics or World cup will help whereas others think that other approaches should be utilized. This essay will discuss both views and opine why other methods are more effective in encouraging people to exercise.
To commence with lets analyze the first view point of watching sports on TV or in-person. While seeing sports give adrenaline rush, it does not necessarily inspire the individuals to take up sports or exercise. Many people watch sports as a source of entertainment but they do not become physically active themselves. For example, people in India are ardent fan of Cricket world cup however rarely they play cricket themselves or do some other physical activity.
On the other hand, second standpoint of incorporating other methods encourages people to become physically active. When people see celebrities going to gym, they get motivated to imitate and become active. For instance, pictures or videos of Bollywood celebrities outside the gym or promotions by famous icons such as Shilpa Shetty's Yoga campaign leaves a huge impact on common people to follow their footsteps. In addition, government should organize Yoga, Swimming, and Marathons to provide a platform to public to learn and imbibe exercise as part of their day today life. Events and competitions could generate enthusiasm and provide quick results and health benefits.
In my opinion, only watching sports from the comfort of your home or going out to watch world cup is not as effective as doing the activities yourself. The effects of experience post participating in activities on individual makes them feel elated and as result they might pursue it again and regularly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, thus, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20454545455 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65994061793 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571022727273 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0163811545 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.764705882 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7058823529 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.572583878874 0.244688304435 234% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163440642529 0.084324248473 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163372057342 0.0667982634062 245% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.375322538425 0.151304729494 248% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.331619825045 0.056905535591 583% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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