Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries.
What are the advantage and disadvantages of this?
At present, various global organizations are rapidly setting up their branches in underdeveloped countries. This essay will first suggest that a good quality product is a primary benefit, while compelling the resources to often do overtime is a major drawback.
The principle benefit is that a multinational organization provide the product with high-quality standards. This is because these companies are abiding to follow standards laid by the international governing agencies, resulting in the best quality production. To provide a good consumer experience is the motive of such companies, which ultimately benefits the end user in underdeveloped nations. For instance, to setup a manufacturing plant in India, the foreign company has to pass the quality audits to demonstrate that they are producing a good quality product.
The main drawback of this trend is that employees of these companies often have to work extra long duration. This is because these companies setup manufacturing plants in underdeveloped nations so that they can save on labour cost. They can hire a resource at one-tenth of the cost that they have to pay a resource in the developed country. Hence, they often abuse the workforce by forcing them to work extra hours, which have an adverse effect on workers' mental and physical health. For example, a recent news revealed that Samsung has come under scrutiny due to the appalling work conditions in their manufacturing plant in Hyderabad.
To conclude, transnational firms often open their branches in less developed nations which results in the best consumer experience for the citizens of these countries. However, the main drawback is that these companies make the resources to work for the extra duration of hours which could impact their health.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: to set up
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Suggestion: companies'; company's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, so, while, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35943060498 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99157261629 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53024911032 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.9040403179 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 115.846153846 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117384211391 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449829406376 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313596833662 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715838533519 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00703189697396 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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