Some people think that people should choose their job based on income in order to provide security for their family. Do you think money is an important factor when choosing a job? what other factors should be considered?
Many people think that one should choose their job based on how much salary they will be paid to ensure the financial well-being of their family members. I strongly agree that money should play a big role in picking up a profession however, it is not wrong to say that there are other equally
important factors too that should also be considered when searching for a job. In the following paragraphs I will discuss the importance of the salary package and some other factors when selecting a job.
The main reason why money is important is that it can make a person financially secure. The money earned can be used to buy basic essentials like food, house and medicines. So, picking a job with more income will mean better opportunities for the person as well as for their loved ones. In a study conducted by Harvard University it was found, 80% of people move to high paying jobs when they want to buy a better house for themselves.
The other crucial point that should be taken under consideration while selecting a job is passion. It is important for people to feel motivated to work and that will only be possible if they have interest in the work that they are assigned to do. If a person is passionate about their work they will not only be happy but will also be more consistent. According to a survey done by Toronto university, it was found that workers who choose their job on the basis of their passion always finish their targets before the deadline.
To conclude, it is true that finalizing a job on the basis of the money that it offers is without a doubt necessary to maintain financial stability but passion is also very important. I always select jobs for myself according to the salary and my interest. As a result, I have always been happy as well as financially stable.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, while, as for, as a result, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59316770186 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.529149913 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503105590062 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7610044469 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.642857143 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412839864556 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130352055178 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932895300774 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232828100194 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102235707404 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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