Nowadays environmental problems are among the most critical questions. What are the causes?Would you give at least one possible solution?
By the end of the 19th century and the beginning of the 20th century, scientific and technical development not only has contributed tremendous benefits to human society but also promoted economic and cultural cooperation among countries. Besides that, the negative impacts of the technological revolution are one of the main causes of environmental pollution. It is an observable fact that environmental pollution has always been a controversial theme during the last few decades. This essay intents to raise some fundamental causes as well as proposing some feasible solutions to deal with this heated question.
Firstly,it is undeniable that one of the major causes of this phenomenon is human activities. In which insufficient awareness of environmental preservation and false consciousness of widespread contamination issues are fundamental causes. In addition, emission and industrial dust from factories, emission from means of transportation, which are causes of air pollution. Moreover, the negative impacts of industrialization, modernization and hazardous industrial wastes that are processed inefficiently or even unprocessed have been making environmental pollution worse as we are witnessing.
In order to address these urgent problems, we need to propose feasible solutions and must be applied immediately. Firstly, propagandize and raise people's environmental protection awareness such as throwing garbage in prescribed places, not littering, limiting the use of detergents to prevent sewage clogging. Secondly, using environmentally friendly energy such as wind, solar, etc and limit the use of gas. Thirdly, perfecting the legal system of environmental protection and building an environmental management system according to international standards. In addition, paying attention to the planning of industrial parks and urban areas. And for industrial zones, there is a need to require companies to invest in infrastructure to build harmful wastewater collection and treatment systems.
In conclusion, although it is hard to manage this global problem in a short time, every effort from the cooperation of the communities definitely brings to powerful effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.94920634921 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47011863717 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612698412698 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9181056058 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.933333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143211565057 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428097176806 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323923646639 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.07655607422 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378159153059 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.23 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.44 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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