Nowadays it is common for people to get married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are younger.
Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society?
Over the latest years, adults have been deciding to start a family later in life, commonly after thirty. Personally, I completely agree that this trend will benefit society. And this essay below will discuss and explain more about my points of view.
To begin with my stating, that a late marriage will also be detrimental to the education of a society. Because many children who were born after 30 years old parents may not be more intelligent than the ones born earlier. Based on scientific facts, their brains will not function quickly and cannot catch up with their friends. Beside that, The young people who marry early do not seriously, it is meanings many people who rely on the mainstream values of society and the opinions of their parents as the basic do not have the capability to thinkk independently. As a result, the number of young couples would increase in broken homes, many children have not carefree childhood.
On the contrary, many people believe in money is the key to a loving family. When an individual’s economic and educational levels are enough to support a family, mothers and fathers would be able to develop their career and have higher incomes, so the kids could join in private schools as well as in extra activities. If people choose to have a late marriage, people would to live the fullest and ready for a serious relationship. As a result, people will have a long period time devoting to their career and squandering their own money in preference.
In conclusion, I agree that the idea of rearing a family at 30 years old will have a wide range of advantages. Due to the fact that not only would couples be more financially stable but also more mature
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...own money in preference. In conclusion, I agree that the idea of rearing a famil...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73898305085 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57606154366 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569491525424 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1352747771 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8571428571 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276253283844 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867231031759 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600779123061 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145842365606 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488998358872 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...own money in preference. In conclusion, I agree that the idea of rearing a famil...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73898305085 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57606154366 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569491525424 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1352747771 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8571428571 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276253283844 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867231031759 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600779123061 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145842365606 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488998358872 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.