Nowadays people get married and have kids in their thirties rather than when they are younger. Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit the society?
In today’s modern world, although people tend to marry in their youth according to their preferences, they usually do their family planning in their middle age. However, whether it would be beneficial for the society if the persons should plan their children later, is the heated topic of debate amidst the masses and a conclusive unanimous agreement is yet to be achieved. I vehemently espouse that getting married and bearing children in their thirties will undeniably benefit the society, let us discuss it in detail in the subsequent paragraphs.
To commence with, let us ponder over the multifarious benefits to society. Predominantly, as from the socio-economic standpoint, planning the birth of a child in the thirties, provide a financially stable future for the whole family along with heading towards a happy society. To explicate, although at the young age an individual is more productive and energetic, he is not economically stable to withstand the needs of a new member with all the medical, educational and other amenities. Nonetheless, when a married couple plans for their child at a bit later stage, they can afford a better living to their offspring and resulting in less broken families, as well as shaping a peaceful community. Subsequently, in the era of inflation, the availability of funds will cause less pressure on the community as well as the nation. To exemplify, a survey conducted by ‘The Ministry of Human Resource and development’, USA, in April, 2019 on a group of 487 families revealed that 77% of couples who conceived their offspring in their thirties after clearing most of their debts while studying or any other at their young age are most secured in handling the responsibility of their children resulting to no mutual conflicts and a great inspiration to other parents in developing social contentment in society.
Moreover, when a person is in his young adulthood, he got enough experience of life to make him sensible and mature. To substantiate, he not only got a well-paying job after years of working, but also a sense of nurturing his family with complete responsibility. As compared with the young age, they might get impatient very easily and most of the times repent for their hasty decisions putting detrimental effects on their family life. Consequently, the couples who plan their family at a later stage become well-prepared for their parenthood. To go deeper, not only the matured parents enjoy parenting, but also inculcate virtuous social values in their children to become a noble citizen of the nation and an asset for the society. Hence, this trend will undoubtedly benefit the general public. For instance, a newspaper article published by Dr. Benjamin Bradlee in ‘The Washington Post’ in June 2017 in his editorial on 'Good Parenting and impact on society' clearly stated that the actions of parents affect the future actions of children. If parents fail in their parenting responsibilities, their children, as adults, have a higher risk of becoming a detriment to society.
To encapsulate, it can be concluded that although during the family planning financial stability and sense of maturity is inevitable for being a good parent, this usually lacks at the young age and might obstruct building the future of their children. Therefore, it is indispensable that to construct a prosperous society, a nation should have happy and contented families. I firmly believe that if the individuals take their decisions wisely in their thirties for planning their kids, the families will flourish at their fullest in all aspects and rejoicing a cheerful community.
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Suggestion: April 2019
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 83.0 41.998997996 198% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3051.0 1615.20841683 189% => OK
No of words: 588.0 315.596192385 186% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1887755102 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9242980521 4.20363070211 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97809414336 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 304.0 176.041082164 173% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517006802721 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 945.9 506.74238477 187% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.0504938975 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.55 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198400098834 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686149958967 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601465027539 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142858564053 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470860307657 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 170.0 78.4519038076 217% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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