Crime rate, in most countries, is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas. Why do you think that is? What can be done to reduce the crime rate?
One of the major issues, in most countries, is the rise in the crime rate in the urban areas than the rural areas. In my opinion, there are several factors that could be the cause for this; unemployment, greediness, high standard of living, political pressure and most importantly, hunger.
People are often more attracted to urban areas than rural due to increase in work opportunities and high standard of living. On the other hand, lack of jobs in countryside where most jobs involve farming and blue-collar jobs which usually is a low paying job. Although, with high standard of living comes higher expenses. The rent gets expensive, groceries and outdoor dining gets costlier. With the urge of fulfilling basic necessities, if unemployment gets hit, then rises the criminal mindset to plan a crime. There is also a thick line between the rich and the poor where in some cases, poor people are often exploited.
The government plays a major role in taking vital actions to spread awareness. They could increase the police task force, especially near schools, banks and high-risk zones. This would indeed increase the costing and indirectly the budget towards the security domain which could be controlled by installing CCTV cameras and security guards. Government could also tighten up the punishment for criminal offenders which could introduce fear in them.
In summary, rise in crime rate in urban areas is a huge concern for most of the countries where the primary focus should be towards the safety of women and children. Also, understanding the reason behind a crime or demystifying the root cause would often help in getting a clear picture of criminal’s mindset. Increase is policemen would definitely aid in reducing the crime rate
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...jobs which usually is a low paying job. Although, with high standard of living comes hig...
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Line 3, column 421, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...s costlier. With the urge of fulfilling basic necessities, if unemployment gets hit, then rises t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, in summary, in my opinion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13240418118 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65843840152 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581881533101 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6996109534 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265737380211 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866336843221 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11079231755 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175347855774 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118134768277 0.056905535591 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.