Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. How can the government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously?
Nowadays, it is getting used to see foreigner in cosmopolitan cities such as New York, Tokyo, Seoul, Vancouver and many others worldwide which means there are different variety of culture, race, religion, language and so on. A Variety would be both good and bad for both local people and foreigner. So, the government should make sure that people live in the city harmoniously to increase positive advantage and cut negative things like crime and racism.
Vancouver is one of biggest and mixed population city in Canada. The Canadian government has their own immigration system and law to help local people and foreigner to live together. First, Canada has strict rule for people who wants to travel, work and study. When do people want to study in Canada, they need to apply study permit with school letter, enrollment letter and bank statement which means they have to prove they are studying in Canada. On the other hand, the Canadian Government invites curtain amount of popular from different countries to give them a chance to work in Canada for one year. It is named as “Working Holiday Work Permit”.
The Canadian Government has immigration system, when people who want to immigrate, they have to prove their ability to live in Canada. For example, one year working experience is minimum need to apply permanent residence even though people who graduate university in Canada and live in Canada more than 10 years. Thus, the Canadian government requires people are able to live in Canada independently without the government support.
Finally, Canada is the most popular country which has a lot of immigration popularity from many countries in the world. The immigration popularity still increases every year and many people want to immigrate to Canada with many economic, cultural and environmental reasons. The Canadian Government would be a global leader that other countries should learn their ideas.
- Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. How can the government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously? 56
- Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. How can the government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously? 56
- Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. How can the government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously? 56
- In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this?What solutions can you suggest? 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, so, still, thus, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19551282051 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66862100168 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528846153846 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4418474439 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.066666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217797190663 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825811042923 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434601357114 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144483841026 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0147202351727 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.