Nowadays in many countries women have full time jobs.Therefore, it is logical to share household tasks evenly between men and women.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
An increasing number of women work full-time today. And this makes the household chores evenly split between men and women.I aggre and I state my reasons in the following paragraphs.
One of the most challenging questions today is about men doing housework. Because women work just like men outside the home.A woman who works outside the home doesn't have enough time to do all the housework. If we delegate everything to her, this would disrupt the family center due to the inability of the woman to manage the household.If we want to think like we did before, half of the community workforce will only have to do housework like housework and cooking and cleaning and housekeeping.here are many women who have extraordinary abilities to do the vital work of the country. And if a country lacks these capabilities, it will slow the country's progress
In the past, men's and women's work was defined. In principle, women used to do housework such as cleaning housewares, and men and women doing outdoor work such as farming and shopping.But today the definition of the past has changed and women are doing full-time work as men.On the other hand, it is true that men do not master the housework because of some of the customs of most countries, but this does not diminish his role in helping at home.And it should also be noted that men have a lot of work to do at home. For example, when the mother of the family is not home for a long time, the father of the family can well manage the shaky affairs.
In conclusion,I believe that given the changes in the structure of family duties, both men and women should be equally responsible for the housework.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72164948454 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63685196278 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529209621993 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.927103813 49.4020404114 271% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 152.666666667 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3333333333 20.7667163134 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1111111111 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274941514098 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124914762208 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593349702088 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180020919377 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668822684518 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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