Nowadays many people choose ready made food and refuse to cook at home.Why do you think it happens? what are the advantages and disadvantages of such a choice.
In this modern world, people are always attached to the digital technology, they did not have time to cook at home.On the other hand few people says that due to the digital migration they prefer buying ready made food and others says ready made food cause major health issues, however lets discuss about the positives and negatives of the ready made foods.
In the current situation based upon the population and time, human beings live a rapid life.For an example, 90% of the people spend their time in their office and work, they do not have time to cook or take care of their daily diet plans. Daily diet plan plays a major role in human health, if a person consume fast food on a regular basis will lead to heart attack, cholesterol, obesity and cancer.Survey says that 30% of the people around the globe has health issue due to the change in food patents and due to the change in food intake timing.It is always a negative sign to take frequent ready made food.
Modern day people always prefer which is quick and essential, especially teenagers and adults love to intake fast foods and ready made foods. Foods such as Pizza, buns, pan cakes, shakes, chocolates, fried rice are the top trending foods consumed by the current trending people. Market is developed after introducing such food panels, working women's and adults are benefited because of the modern day food and they are able to manage their time accordingly with the quick and fast made ready foods.For an example review says that the market growth and people's interest play a role in the countries economic situation,current economic situation is a peak due the food industries.
To conclude, in this rapid world its always good to have a quick meal and focus on other activities but the meal should be packed with healthy substances, in this current world healthy foods are so expensive and very few. So its better have home made food to live a long life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, however, if, so, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72106824926 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33431784271 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516320474777 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.766453203 49.4020404114 238% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 198.875 106.682146367 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.125 20.7667163134 203% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2099079787 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101708968165 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520188392924 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134924992329 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526207968292 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.9 13.0946893788 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.31 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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