Some type of employments are more suitable for men and other types of employment are more appropriate for women.
To what extent do you agree? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experiences.
Jobs of different natures are best suited to each gender. Some people think that a few specialized jobs can be better performed by men rather than females, while some maintain that both genders can equally do better in all spheres of employment. This essay will discuss that both men and women can equally do well in any type of job.
Firstly, there are myriad of arguments in favour of my stance. The world’s dynamics has changed significantly and as of now both men and women are considered equal. This entails that jobs of any nature are not gender bounded but can be performed by qualified men and women. As an example, qualified women are now seen leading multinational companies once dominant by men. This scenario has undoubtedly put an end to gender discrimination in job sector.
On the other hand, owing to peculiar and more physical nature military employments were thought to be best suitable for men only. However, with the passage of time women have proved to be equally good in this sphere. For instance, women are now performing the duties of fighter pilot and are standing shoulder to shoulder with their counterparts in the line of duty. Hence, job restriction based on gender has been completely ruled out.
Despite of gender dissimilarity, both have emerged to be successful in all domains of employment. Therefore, I opine that no job is best suited for any gender and united together both men and women can do wonders in all sort of employments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the best'.
Suggestion: be the best
...re military employments were thought to be best suitable for men only. However, with th...
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Line 7, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... do wonders in all sort of employments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, sort of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88888888889 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72772362795 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563492063492 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3432151501 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155090541076 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054288542552 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057235775453 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997077810655 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469669756054 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.5 Out of 90
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