Nowadays more and more people have to compete with young people for the same jobs.
What problems does this cause?
What are some possible solutions?
At present, many aged persons have to face severe competition by young generation to get a job. The primary problem of this phenomenon is that old people are getting lesser jobs and the most viable solution is that governments should reduce retirement age and provide the pension.
The most obvious problem associated with this situation is that aged generation is not able to get a job. This is to say that old people do not have updated qualification which could have made them a desired candidate. Therefore, they are not able to cope up with the financial needs and end up under huge debts. The result of this is old people are under pressure and even take jobs that are out of their professional forte. For example, a recent government survey revealed that 72% of the older people lost their jobs because the same position was offered to a younger person.
A long term solution to this predicament is that the government should reduce the retirement age and provide good pension plan. This would result in aged resources to vacant their current positions and avail the pension scheme. This will allow old generation to live their future life without financial burden. Furthermore, the vacant position could be allocated to the younger people. For instance, recently government of India launched a scheme of voluntary retirement with double pension plan so that retired people are not at financial loss and vacant jobs can be provided to the recent graduates.
In conclusion, elder people often get tough competition from youngsters to get a job resulting in lesser opportunities for older candidates, however it can be addressed through providing early retirement option and better pension plans by the government.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06666666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69426165401 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8152972282 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.076923077 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169766446329 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671216956188 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394490926277 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110949333378 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483104641783 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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