Nowadays most people are not as fit and active, as they were in the past. What are the main causes for this situation? Suggest some possible solutions.
In the current era, many individuals are dependent on machines for doing activities that were done by them earlier in the past. With such a transition in the lifestyle, these people are not physically fit and active, In this essay, I will discuss the causes of this ongoing trend along with some possible solutions to encounter this problem.
There are numerous causes with the problem of modern lifestyle where people are not as fit and active like they were in the past. Firstly, individuals living in the cities are so busy and occupied for different reasons. The reasons could be the way they are living, the work which they are doing, stress, and financial crisis. Apparently, this makes them not following healthy habits such as eat on time, minimize the sugar content as well as adding up high protein products. For instance, according to the WHO survey, more than seventy percent of juveniles are affected by obesity disease because of the junk food diet in their daily lives. This disease has made the youth life expectancy short because obesity leads to various severe diseases which could take people's lives away. As a result, with the small population of youth in a nation, the backbone of the country could become undermine in front of other countries in terms of economic, financial, and infrastructure developments.
Despite such problems in the current lifestyle of non-physically fit individuals, there are some possible solutions to eradicate the effect of non-activeness among people. The first and foremost focus of reforming and turning a healthy diet into the daily lives of individuals. With such effect, people will not become fat and will be able to put more effort in physical activities tasks of their daily lives without using machines. Secondly, the daily half-hour regular exercise in the life of humans will bring many benefits such as increasing stamina, build strength and endurance. With these benefits, people will become physically fit and active like they used to be in past. Finally, the government should increase taxes on the price of junk foods. With this action, people will have no option left to eat home-cooked healthy meals because not everyone is rich in the world.
In conclusion, the advancements of modern lifestyle may have resulted in becoming unfit and unhealthy in many humans but, every problem has a solution and with some possible solutions people could overcome with such kind of problem if they will follow the above solution appropriately.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 673, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2102.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11435523114 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63545995029 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525547445255 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.9 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.857219226 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.647058824 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1764705882 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76470588235 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270488723695 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874579271618 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864559742907 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190409548463 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651102113678 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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