Nowadays parents give more freedom to their children than in the past. is it positive or negative development? Give your opinion of include relevant example.
Giving freedom to children is being debated to an estabilished manner as it is more sensible to determine their future in terms of respect and trust in the society.
All children in this world have their own life and they always want the best.
Firstly, children should be given freedom to make their own decision in what they want to do.
This allows them to learn how to handle different scenario independently. Knowing their value, managing hard situation, how not to over-schedule their
lives - especially for the exams, goal settings, holidays etc. Let them make mistakes as it is another way to learn good and bad in their life.
Nowadays, many parents do not trust their own children and some of them take an action by controlling their children’s life and also their activities.
For instance, when a kid bothers for parent's yelling words on a public tranport, it leads them feeling stress and depressed.
Instead, teach them what went wrong from his/her end and make them understand the rule or behaviour that is supposed to be changed
In addition to that, teach them the road safety and help them to correct their mistakes if it happens again.
Yes, freedom is utterly necessary for children in terms of planning their life as long as they do not against law, humanity, respect with elders
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion:
...ainst law, humanity, respect with elders
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96860986547 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56917994441 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596412556054 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1456000065 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.8 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168403308622 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737055613477 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591245745767 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737250502505 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588067283641 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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