During the time of current era, parents are considerate regarding their children and they want there kids to achieve a milestone. For that, parents overly force their kids to word hard, score high and succeed in future. From my perspective, it is disadvantageous for kids and this essay tends to shed light of various factors behind this phenomenon and its negative repercussions.
To commence with, it is unequivocal that parents creates negative environment as they put immense stress on their kids. Parents want their children to excel in field of education and become a victorious man in future so they neglect all the activities that boost calibre of the kids and focus only on studies. Children are overburdened with studies and fully loaded with all the educational activities and thus kids do not have any time left for any recreational activity. Hence, it effects productivity and creativity in students. According to a recent survey, 95% of students are equipped with extra classes after school that reduces efficiency, output and exerts mental pressure on children. It is well said- A happy mind leads to happy body,so if children will be mentally relaxed so their output will be enhanced.
Furthermore, creating negative aura around kids will impact on their growth and developmennt. Moreover, it will hinder mental development of child and reduces fecundity. Children undergo many health implications such as mental trauma, depression, anxiety, brain disorders. These disorders are life threatening and causes serious damage to life. Recent research conducted by Indian medical institute reveals that almost 85% of mental issues are caused due to stress and overemphasising things and this is the major reason behind suicidal attempts.
In conclusion, from aforementioned contentions, I am inclined to believe that burdening by parents is the major culprit behind this scenario and this is indisputably a horrific trend as it can make children susceptible to serious illnesses.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 210, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ds to word hard, score high and succeed in future. From my perspective, it is disadvantag...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 745, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , so
...l said- A happy mind leads to happy body,so if children will be mentally relaxed so...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38977635783 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94102949365 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610223642173 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1401559985 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.466666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284423074779 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796183292866 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521579705708 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161972862115 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475956012874 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.