Nowadays people prefer to get married and have children in their 30s/30’s rather than when they are younger.
Is it positive or negative development?
Do you agree or disagree?
To what extent do you disagree/agree?
In today’s time people prefer marrying and having children in their late 30s rather than in their younger ages. Some people consider it to be a positive trend, whereas, other believe it to be a negative trend. In my opinion, I do agree marrying and having children in their later ages is preferred as people not only financially and professionally stable but they also develop a sense of maturity which are the foundation stone for a married life.
Many individuals believe that people should get married and having children in their early 20s is a good option as women’s fertility rate is higher at this age rather than when they are in their mid-thirties and have more complications in having children. Moreover, people in their young ages are more flexible and adaptable. They can easily gel up with new family members and their customs and thus can avoid conflicts and arguments.
However, others opine that for a person to get married and have children should have a sense of responsibility, understanding and maturity to take to support the family emotionally as well as to teach their children moral and ethical values and aid them in being a good citizen. Furthermore, people prefer to marry and have children in the late 30s as they are able to have a prosperous career and financial strength to support their family in terms of providing education and a comfortable life. To exemplify, according to the recent report 80 percent of the divorces happen because of immature nature and less understanding level of the partners.
To conclude, I vehemently agree that marriage and have children is the paramount decision of one's life and one should take this decision in their later ages when they are socially, mentally and financially stable to take up the responsibilities
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 94, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...e children is the paramount decision of ones life and one should take this decision ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, as to, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00666666667 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86032437943 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506666666667 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.4820386217 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.2 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344154339039 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139653447831 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100729617079 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212471048253 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0952438973739 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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