Nowadays people prefer to get married and have children in their 30s/30’s rather than when they are younger.
Is it positive or negative development?
Do you agree or disagree?
To what extent do you disagree/agree?
In present time people prefer marrying and having children in their late 30s rather than in their 20s. Some people consider it to be a positive trend, whereas, other believe it to be a negative trend. In my opinion, I do agree marrying and having children in their later ages is preferred as people not only financially and professionally stable but they also develop a sense of maturity which are the foundation stone for a married life.
Many individuals believe that people should get married and having children in their early 20s is a good option as women’s fertility rate is higher at this age rather than when they are in their mid-thirties and have more complications in having children. Moreover, people in their young ages are more flexible and adaptable. They can easily gel up with new family members and their customs and thus can avoid conflicts and arguments. To elucidate, according to the recent report more than 50 percent of women conceiving babies suffer more difficulties and problems
However, others opine that for a person to get married and have children should have a sense of responsibility, understanding and maturity to support the family emotionally as well as to teach their children moral and ethical values and aid them in being a good citizen. . To exemplify, 80 percent of the divorces worldwide happen because of immature nature and less understanding level of the partners. Furthermore, people prefer to marry and have children in the late 30s due to the reason have a prosperous career and financial strength to support their family in terms of providing education and a comfortable lifestyle. If someone works in a renowned organisation and have a substantial banks balance one will be able to fulfil all the needs and desires of their family. To elucidate, people marrying without financial security leas to more tensions and conflicts which not only affects their relationship but also hampers the growth of children
To conclude, I vehemently agree that marriage and have children is the paramount decision of one's life and one should take this decision in their later ages when they are socially, mentally and financially stable to take up the responsibilities
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, as to, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08219178082 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86762919536 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509589041096 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.250584287 49.4020404114 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.636363636 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.1818181818 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314089563387 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126095749983 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919572957853 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199673639493 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834504338263 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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