You recently read an article in newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to editor to inform him about it. Use following points:
What is the article about?
What is the error?
What you expect an editor to do?
I am writing this letter in connection with your article on 15 June 2018 under section environment and protection with your newspaper Times of India . the article contains information regarding the recent save water imitative named 'saving the water today = saving our future tomorrow '.
This is a small campaign started by colleague James Smith, to proliferate of saving the habit of water among the youth. In that article, you have mentioned that James will be given some government aid to run this expedition, which is not entirely true. James will only get 50% of the funding from government and rest will be paid by his own pocket .
Hence, I request you to kindly rectify your error in your perusal I am attaching hear with his letter the flyer sheet of the campaign in which it was explicitly justified who will fund how much.
Looking to hear from you soon in this issue for rectification of above-mentioned error .
yours faithfully,
John mark.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...water today = saving our future tomorrow . This is a small campaign started by...
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...itly justified who will fund how much. Looking to hear from you soon in this is...
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... yours faithfully, John mark.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98757763975 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67484125313 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670807453416 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.8147734788 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.375 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122472025808 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487602738789 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389046699766 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0518231833485 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410581990381 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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