Nowadays there are many medical surveys of treatments to reduce health problems. Who should conduct them, governments, individuals or private companies, in your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your experience.
In the present days a lot of people have an opportunity to check their health by medical surveys. One of the issues regarding this situation is who has to conduct the surveys? From my point of view, it is government responsibility to provide this medical service for people.
First of all, if we look through the history of humanity, it will be easy to find a lot of diseases and epidemics. This example shows the importance for public to protect everyone’s health, because this problem can be increased to the global level. Thus, government have to provide the high level of medical services to improve the society.
Secondly, there are a lot of medical problems with health, I would say too many problems. So, it is not enough to protect humanity with only government measures. The help from private companies and individuals is very important. So nowadays it is the most effective way to reduce health problem. The medical sphere is huge and resolution of many problems costs unbelievable number of money. Thus, it forced lots of people to unite and find best ways of health protection.
However, only for government it should be the main responsibility for providing the medical surveys, in my opinion. Because without private companies and individuals it will be more difficult to protect our health, but without government it would be impossible. For instance, in my country the government have a lot of programs to check our health in schools, kindergartens. At the same time everyone can go through the special and complex medical examination every year. It is very useful and without resources from government we cannot do this.
In conclusion, it is interesting and important issue without any obvious solutions. Hopefully, humanity will find more effective ways to protect human health from epidemics in the future.
- Many countries consider eighteen year olds to be adults, while other countries don’t. What do you think about it? Give your opinion and some relevant examples based on your own experience. 73
- Many countries consider eighteen year olds to be adults, while other countries don’t. What do you think about it? Give your opinion and some relevant examples based on your own experience. 73
- Nowadays there are many medical surveys of treatments to reduce health problems. Who should conduct them, governments, individuals or private companies, in your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your experience. 73
- Restoration of old buildings in main cities involves enormous government expenditure. It would be more beneficial to spend this money to build new houses and roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include examples 56
- Lectures were used in the past as a way of teaching large numbers of students. With the technology now available for education, there is no longer any justification for this way of teaching. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 436, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'find the best'.
Suggestion: find the best
..., it forced lots of people to unite and find best ways of health protection. However, on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06600660066 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89284423118 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524752475248 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.6687476804 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.7894736842 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9473684211 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171055832813 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565718587296 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393775070263 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953058603845 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430944846165 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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