Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish Why do you think this is happening What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced

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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

The majority of countries facing many problems because of people produce more and more garbage and waste. Today, waste management is in the first place in the priority list of every country. currently, people generate a huge amount of sludge. there are many reasons for this. In this essay, I will point out the reasons and also provide some solutions which help to prevent this problem.

there are plenty of reasons for this situation. first and foremost, currently, everyone is busy in their hectic life. they do not have time to make food for themselves and they use can food, junk food, and pre-cooked food. In that way, they follow use and throw culture which increasing the waste. Not only that, people use plastic bags when they are going for shopping instead of cloth bags. Additionally, factories drained wastewater in the river without pasteurizing.

Moreover, the majority of industries did not use their sewage system for waste management. Furthermore, people use their vehicles instead of public transportation. By doing so, the gases released from the vehicles are contributing the global warming and air pollution. Besides that, the farmer uses artificial fertilizer for the crop. As a result, land pollution is increasing.

there are some solutions which help to solve the problems. To begin with, the authority has to introduce some rules such as "No plastic". To describe, the government has to ban plastic bags and convince people to use cloth and recyclable things. What is more, people have to collect garbage in a different form. To illustrate, in Canada people throw recycle items, organic items and waste items in different bins. Finally, the government has to provide education and arrange a campaign about waste management.

To conclude, both the government and individuals have to take some steps to solve this problem. Rubbish things cause multiple problems for individuals as well as nations. It leads to a lot of diseases such as heart disease, cancer and many more.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS General Training

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, as to, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with, what is more, in the first place

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19877675841 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70001660841 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553516819572 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.6111082548 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.0 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.08 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152811957945 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364456918958 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427155367118 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807422525479 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474109664043 0.056905535591 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.99 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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