The number of old people around the world is increasing dramatically.
Could this have more positive or negative effects on society?
The growing number of aged individuals throughout the globe is a cause for concern. Although this has some benefits, the downside effects such as vulnerability and complex medical care are contentious issues. In my opinion, I believe the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
It cannot be denied that old people are the majority of voters in elections. Even though they are frail in nature, they perform their civil duties with passion, and play the leading role in determining the future of the nation through election polls. To illustrate this, the Sun newspaper in Nigeria, on the 1st of March, 2019, reported that the age group 70 - 85 years old were the majority of voters, which is about 40% of the total amount of votes counted. This shows their relentless efforts to contribute to the growth of the economy.
However, there are some cons of having too many old ones in the society; one of which is vulnerability. When an individual becomes old, the body system becomes weak, and therefore it cannot protect itself from danger. When this happens, there would be need for a compulsory carer to lean on, otherwise old people might get hurt. Another issue that is worthy of our attention concerns complex medical care. The cost of care for aged individuals is high and profitless, which is why insurance companies pull out. This, inevitably leaves either the government or the families of the aged individuals to foot the bills, which is undoubtedly inconvenient. My point is, frailty turns old ones to burden on the resources.
In conclusion, despite the fact that old people are good citizens who have the best interest of the nation at heart, they pose some problems of financial liability on the society. For this reason the negative effects are more than the positive effects on the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'March 2019'.
Suggestion: March 2019
...Sun newspaper in Nigeria, on the 1st of March, 2019, reported that the age group 70 - 85 ye...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99669966997 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66563489966 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613861386139 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9388971451 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.625 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211194895301 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638184044502 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708052518603 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12971047248 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711601348697 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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