The number of older people is increasing in many parts of the world. What are the effects of this on society as a whole? What are the advantages or disadvantages of this trend?
It is an undeniable fact that the percentage of the elderly population is significantly increasing day by day. The following paragraphs discuss the effects, pros and cons which have been arisen due to the above notion.
on the one hand, the population which in between the age of 16 to 60 is the vital part of a country because a significant percentage of the workforce who propel the nation are them. But, when the elderly population become the majority of a county it increases the number of dependents who must b looked after. As a result, contribution to the GDP of a country is decreasing and its time to prosperity can be elongated. Moreover, most of the elderly people are vulnerable to diseases may cause to allocate a hefty sum of a budget for their healthcare. This is not only to utilize money but also use a chance of a viable person.
on the other hand, elderly people can be considered a precious resource to society. Because they bear the experience of previous employment and life adventures. Therefore, they must be motivated to share their knowledge with youngsters. And also they have the potential to become teachers and counsellors in various fields and support the others. Further, elder people can look after their grandchildren while their parents involved in employment. This is a common nature in South Asian countries. By doing that parents can complete their tasks successfully because they feel her/his child is safe at home with their grandparents.
Taking everything into consideration I pen down saying that the aged population must be considered as a resource and treated them with more humanity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99635036496 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92231863216 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591240875912 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5061361729 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0735058482426 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0263442010475 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310333961066 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0376303274967 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315509095016 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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