It is true that, in this contemporary era, food shortage are being escalated day by day in all over the world. A number of masses contemplate that food can be produced by technologies or fertilizer and so on. Furthermore, according to my perspective, it is an exemplary way for producing food.
To commence with, our world population is being increased at an unprecedented rate due to this only. People are having to confront shortage of food. However, if we would produce more crops by genetically method so it saves our time, apart from it, we would easily grow more than one crop at a same time. It does not matter we are growing seasonal crops or unseasonal. Another reason could be, if we would put fertilizers, pesticides, in our crops so it would protect from incects after that profit of farmers can also be raised entirely. For example, to exemplify, according to a survey, it can be manifested that, right now we have big halls and all the temperature are controlled by scientists. Additionally, they can increase or decrease temperature according to crop capacity.
Looking at the other view, we know very well nothing is totally perfect in this world. Everything has advantages as well as disadvantages. Firstly, when we would consume more fertilizers or pesticides crops or unseasonal vegetables or fruits instead of organic crops then in the future we can be faced many diseases because it has been scientifically proven these type of things would harmful our body. Moreover, life expectancy ratio would also start decreasing of people due to chemicals crops.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly population is being raised day by day and we do not have sufficient food for feeding our people and these type of things are not perfect yet, we must understand that if we will use these methods then we can fulfill the problem of food shortage. In addition, it saves times, increase profit of farmers as well.
- Experts say older people were happier and healthier in the past because they did more exercise and spent more time with family and friends whereas many now suffer from loneliness and health problems What are the causes of this and what are some solutions 73
- In many Countries the amount of crime is increasing What do you think are the main causes of Crime How can we deal with those causes 93
- Nowadays many people want to buy famous brands of clothes cars and other items What are the reasons for this Do you think it is a positive or a negative development 89
- Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as older houses in the local area Others disagree and say that local authorities should allow people to build houses in the style s of their own choice Discuss both view and give your own 84
- some people think that mobile phones are harmful to children while others disagree Discuss both the views and give your opinion 72
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, well, apart from, for example, in addition, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91411042945 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88803966064 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561349693252 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.2880933004 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.125 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0916514992699 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375798642601 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472661951258 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0699536615091 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420745956289 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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