In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard
it as a hobby.
To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?
Years ago people went to shopping when they were out of food or they needed something. As life is
hanged now there is a shopping trend, where people go to department store and buy something just
for fun. This leads to over –consumption which is a big problem in 21.century.
In the past there wasn’t need to buy anything without any reason. Nowadays there are commercials,
catalogues, advertisements which are so common that people go to shop and buy what was in
commercial. It is normal to spend your time in department store and buy new pair of shoes or new
telephone. After shopping people feel temporary happiness but when they look at their bank
account, all good emotions are gone and replaced by worry and regrets. For example, Colombia
University survey was showing that students who spend free time in shopping centres are 35%
unhappy than their college students, who spend their free time in nature.
In present time people have more items in their home than it was couple of centuries ago. Humans
are used to buy always something new when something is broken or they gain/lose weight or style is
changed. That means that most of our population have closets full of items and some of them have
even price tag on it. Over-consumption is a big problem in our nation, because this can lead to
hoarding. For example, in USA there are 15% more hoarders than in Europe, as USA is
commonwealth country and people are more tending to buy unnecessary things as they see them in
advertisements.
In conclusion, shopping is a common task but it can lead to over consumption and make people
unhappy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 14, column 6, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'priced'.
Suggestion: priced
...ll of items and some of them have even price tag on it. Over-consumption is a big pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72178475359 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553571428571 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0458210483 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21428571429 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.38176352705 388% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146306103785 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533604954154 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475975416952 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.048533497149 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470320804011 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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