Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
• Explain why you cannot go anymore
• Say who can go instead of you
• Say why this person is a good person to go with
Dear Paul
I would like to apologise for cancelling your invitation for Friday’s Marvel premiere movie night.
Unfortunately I can’t go with you as I have already pre booked Health and Safety conference which I have to attend because of my work. As it’s related to my work and already paid I can’t cancel it.
I have a good friend Mark who can go instead of me. Me and Mark met in Comic Con event in San Fransisco and he is really into Marvel comics and movies as yourself. I would like to recommend you to go with him.
Mark knows every Marvel comic and movies so you guys can have a really cool movie night together. Both of you have similar interests and I think you can get along really good. He also lives close to movie theatre.
Anyway, let me know what to you think.
Best wishes
Peter
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f me. Me and Mark met in Comic Con event in San Fransisco and he is really into M...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, really, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 686.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57333333333 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45162984337 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0906862738 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.3636363636 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6363636364 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266060235679 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103044264345 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780084491003 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141246084026 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498520018646 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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