People doing different jobs enjoy different amount of holiday time.
Should people have the same amount of holiday time? Give your opinion.
People have different amount of vacation period who are doing jobs in different professions. Owing to this, I deem that people should not have equal amount of holiday time because it should be as per the type of the jobs which I have discussed in following paragraphs.
To commence with, people should enjoy their holidays according to their professions because there are some fields which are highly in demand, especially during public holidays. For example, shopping is preferred by common people on Sunday or public holidays, therefore, if supermarkets are closed on these days then people will have to face adversities. In addition to that, teachers can also not take longer brakes during educational year because it may disturb the study of the students. Therefore, these are the plausible reasons to bolster the notion that people should not have same amount of holiday time.
Additionally, holiday period also affected by the menace and critical activity concomitant with the work. To exemplify, a heart surgeon requires breaks at regular interval of time to rejuvenate himself from the texting surgeries. However, people who are working in Police department or Indian Army are less likely to get holidays frequently due to their hectic schedules and work. To illustrate, one of my friends is serving in Indian navy who has to work for six consecutive months without having holidays. Thus, by considering above mentioned factors, I could opine that holidays should be as per the type of profession.
To recapitulate, I oppose the notion of having equal amount of holiday time for every job because of their necessity at particular time as well as type of work. Furthermore, it is recommended that, people should enjoy their holidays but priority should be given to their work as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'amounted'.
Suggestion: amounted
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... should be given to their work as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14675767918 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72124754097 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552901023891 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.079763837 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.451892070703 0.244688304435 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166362647943 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137196726585 0.0667982634062 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.308137089051 0.151304729494 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135668250325 0.056905535591 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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