People doing different jobs enjoy different amount of holiday time. Should people have the same amount of holiday time? Give your opinion
It is certainly true that individual's vacation period vary according to their field of work. While it is argued by some that holiday period must be same for people of all occupations, other's assert that it can have variation depending upon the area of employment.
To begin with, has different level of stress. Few people have to handle more pressure more pressure than the other. Although fulfilling the demand and timely completion of task is required in almost every occupation, but some are more stressful and hectic than others. For example, doctors can be called anytime in the hospital even in midnight if there is any emergency in the hospital, same is the case with police force. Since few professions requires more hour of devotion to work, so allotting them increased hours of leisure time can be easily justified. Apart from this, in many organization especially in public sectors, employees who are holding sensitive positions are transferred frequently from one location to another. Because of posting at far places they have to live away from the family; however providing more number of leaves can definitely help them to maintain work and personal life balance in a better way.
Digging deeper, jobs which are target based requires more efforts and employee who complete the task timely manner are rewarded. For example, few companies provide free holiday package to executives as a reward, as they work hard to achieve all the budget. It is basically done as a kind of motivation so that others also starve to achieve their goals.. If somebody have zeal and power to perform in outstanding manner, they can easily demand more holidays. Considering the work which does not require to put much efforts and are easy to perform. People working on such profiles can have free time even during the working hours. Therefore, they can enjoy their life even by availing few leaves.
In conclusion, unequivocally each and every profession is entirely different in the matter of responsibility, duties, assignments and timing. Hence, offering some leisure time to all is not at all a fair option, it must be related to the level and type of the employment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'more pressure'.
Suggestion: more pressure
...el of stress. Few people have to handle more pressure more pressure than the other. Although fulfilling the...
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Line 3, column 582, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun organization seems to be countable; consider using: 'many organizations'.
Suggestion: many organizations
...e easily justified. Apart from this, in many organization especially in public sectors, employee...
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Line 3, column 599, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d. Apart from this, in many organization especially in public sectors, employees ...
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Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reward, as they work hard to achieve all the budget. It is basically done as a ki...
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Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...thers also starve to achieve their goals.. If somebody have zeal and power to perf...
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Line 5, column 368, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'somebody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...ve to achieve their goals.. If somebody have zeal and power to perform in outstandin...
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Line 5, column 504, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'putting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: putting
...idering the work which does not require to put much efforts and are easy to perform. P...
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Line 5, column 511, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... the work which does not require to put much efforts and are easy to perform. People...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1814.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02493074792 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6498997775 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573407202216 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5164575615 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.777777778 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0555555556 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161579296634 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489141868824 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043167746989 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981007734563 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156292407873 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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