Even though most people agree that everyone must protect the environment, many do not act upon this. I believe this is due to the required extra steps and this problem could be alleviated with the help of a rewarding system.
The most obvious challenge people face in protecting nature is having to change the regular procedures in their day-to-day tasks. It takes many extra steps to complete a task in a nature-friendly manner, whereas it takes fewer steps to do the same task in the usual way. Humans, taking every possible shortcut, find it harder to deviate from their regular life patterns without any instant benefit. Recycling, for instance, needs the public to sort their garbage into groups, which is just a single extra step and even this has resulted in people choosing not to recycle.
Firstly, rewarding people who opt for helping nature, as I believe, is one of the most prominent solutions to overcome this situation. If green companies or governments could return money or discounts for individuals who collect and sort garbage, it would motivate more to follow this path. Secondly, a positive attitude towards recycling would be effective in persuading population, in particular the younger generation, to act nature friendly due to the trend. They will actively involve youths all over the world in their agenda and promote this healthy practice. For example, Norway government started a project in 2010 with college students and it went viral on social media as a huge success.
In conclusion, even though most people do not feel that they should take action on it, everyone is aware of the importance of environment protection. However, persuading them with rewarding systems and developing social movements can be identified as the most viable solutions for this.
- Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos while others think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important Discuss both views 67
- Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make Has this been a positive or negative development 84
- Some people prefer renting than buying a home What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting your home 78
- The most effective way to solve traffic and transport problems in the cities is to encourage people from suburbs or the countryside to live in the cities To what extent do you agree or disagree 65
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10580204778 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68916857509 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610921501706 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.0853436296 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 115.076923077 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225792424025 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755270141949 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567072984193 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142526251621 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472549988541 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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