plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment
Nowadays, it is believed that plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. In this essay, I would examine reason of pollution of variety plastics which have a shabby impact for our earth and how deal with it before coming to reasonable conclusion.
In the other hand, there are some reason why that plastics or other pollution have a bad effect. Firstly, time of recycle of plastic need 100 years rather than rubbish of plant which need a few a days. It is because material of plastic hard to parse in ground. So people must give attention about it, because when a mountain plastic not recycled, it will be impact to our environment, other animals and humans. Secondly, inadequate knowledge people of dangerous the plastic in earth. It is due to, student in school not provided a lesson of awareness of environment. For example, many plastic variety which have to separate it . As a result, they don’t know about kind of plastic, despite they thrown a rubbish into dump.
However to tackle this issues firstly, government must make a several policy in order to civilization aware about our environment. For instance, government can use a platform in electrical devise such as smartphone application to advertise policy, give reward to people which give a good impact and give punishment to people which thrown a rubbish as not a policy. Secondly, government make a regulation business of company that product a plastic. Because without control of government, they will produce a lot of product plastic. For example, a company can produce certain numbers of plastic a year. That ways will be reduce rubbish of plastics.
In conclusion, I would like to say that many role in our country. We can realization to keep environment from role of government, company and civilization. Without one of them, it will hard to realize.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 194, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... than rubbish of plant which need a few a days. It is because material of plastic hard...
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Line 2, column 626, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...lastic variety which have to separate it . As a result, they don’t know about kind...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...spite they thrown a rubbish into dump. However to tackle this issues firstly, governme...
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Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun policy seems to be countable; consider using: 'several policies'.
Suggestion: several policies
... issues firstly, government must make a several policy in order to civilization aware about ou...
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Line 3, column 412, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y, government make a regulation business of company that product a plastic. Becau...
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Line 3, column 506, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun product seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of products'.
Suggestion: a lot of products
...ontrol of government, they will produce a lot of product plastic. For example, a company can pro...
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Line 4, column 41, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun role seems to be countable; consider using: 'many roles'.
Suggestion: many roles
...In conclusion, I would like to say that many role in our country. We can realization to k...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97435897436 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77804667069 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522435897436 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.6007605516 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6842105263 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4210526316 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21052631579 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408925086733 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136175499356 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154316663989 0.0667982634062 231% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251125507397 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.170172672111 0.056905535591 299% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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