Prevention is better than cure and vaccination is best way to do it. Some people
believe artificial immunising children is harmful way of protecting children and might
affect their immunity system. While others believe government should mandate by
law all parents for vaccinating their kids and thus protect herd immunity. Let’s look
into various logical deductions for both arguments in this essay.
Vaccination is just a way of boosting immunity to a certain disease by introducing
deactivated virus genome code into our body. Thus, our body defence system create
suitable antibodies and prepare them for future attack of same virus. Traditionalists,
who believe ill effects of such artificial immunisation, argue that vaccinations do not
give 100 % protection from all viruses and might even cause damage to natural
immunity by giving allergic reactions. However, we should not forget all vaccinations
are manufactured under strict surveillance of Medical boards and immunology
experts. Also, there is no reason for worrying side effects when laboratory
experiments are done for minimising allergens. When small pox vaccine was
discovered it revolutionised medical history and same technique was used for
creating other vaccines like Polio, cow pox and Measles etc. Other scientists like
Louis Pasteur made similar inventions for treating animals.
Even in 21 st century many African and Asian countries children are largely affected
by viruses like influenza, Malaria because of lack of vaccination. Mainly this problem
accounts 30% of population in Southern America due to lack of awareness and
those who are aware simply ignore such methods as unethical to their religious
beliefs. Definitely, parents have certain rights and responsibilities over their children
but this should not necessarily mean going against welfare of their own children.
Hence in my personal opinion it’s prime and paramount interest of government to
legally mandate all parents to provide immunisation to all children. One way to bring this into action is bringing awareness by educating every one and debunking myths
about immunisation. Many countries like America, India, UK have effectively followed
this method and successfully declared their lands as Polio free nations. Recently,
countries like Uganda, South Africa successfully implemented this method and
became one of few nations in Africa to be declared Virus free lands. However, World
Health Organisation reports suggest that still 45% of young children in third world
countries are vulnerable to deadly Viral and Bacterial infection. Inaccurate measures
by local authorities are to be blamed for Pandemic diseases.
In conclusion, we can say without legal authority Governments cannot bring
unanimous support for vaccinating children. After all, today’s children are tomorrow
citizens and their health is nation’s wealth. We cannot expect illiterate parents to be
aware of recent developments in medical field. Hence better way to build strong demography is bring statutory and legislative amendments for immunising young
children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, so, still, third, thus, while, after all, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2693.0 1615.20841683 167% => OK
No of words: 463.0 315.596192385 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81641468683 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92023794369 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 176.041082164 164% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622030237581 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 832.5 506.74238477 164% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9847707021 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.208333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2916666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 36.0 4.38176352705 822% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182026425119 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501640235577 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328648640291 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0396248100461 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345871758353 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 159.0 78.4519038076 203% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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