Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no special knowledge of the following topic:
News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
News is integral part of our life and media is known as fourth pillar of democracy. Having said that, media plays very strong role in shaping society. At one hand it's media responsbility to keep viewer or listner aware of current afairs and on the other hand Media should not forget their responsbility of shaping the future of society by spreadng positivity around.
Nowadays, every thing is commercialised including pring and electronic media. Since, media is independent and privatised, one of its foremost objective, similar to any other organization, is to make profit. To maintain their profitability, they tend to print news which attracts their viewer or help to maintain their viewerships. Pyscologists has proved that as a citizen we are more attracted towards negativity around us.
Secondly, due to fierece competetion, Media house compete with each other to break the news first. This generally lead them to compete for similar news and no news channel or reporter, in order to remain in the race and follow trend, step back and try to do somthing new.
On one hand negative news help people to understand what's going on around and on the other hand it also alert them, For example: If a Media publish news that crime against people travelling after midnight has increased, citizens will be cautious and will not tend to make such plan.
Negative news is important for awareness. However, it dosen't shape the society. News editor must show and print positive news. Pyschologist, who found out that people get attreported that ultimately negativity upset their mood and on the other hand positive news inspite of being not so attractive brings positivity in their mind. Positive news does inspire a society that inturns bring more postivity. For example: When a news channel suceess story of a poor boy, others also get inspired and try to achieve impossible goals.
Finally, I would like to end my argument by saying that media has been playing a very important role in society and it's time for them to raise their game and become a strong pillar in nation building.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...negative news help people to understand whats going on around and on the other hand i...
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Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'alerts'?
Suggestion: alerts
...on around and on the other hand it also alert them, For example: If a Media publish n...
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Line 7, column 133, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a medium' or simply 'Media'?
Suggestion: a medium; Media
...and it also alert them, For example: If a Media publish news that crime against people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00286532951 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64952048213 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573065902579 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.4616428359 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.705882353 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5294117647 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0984089751921 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333348804381 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036294286845 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0518778727566 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318079695002 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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