Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic.
Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and with relevant evidence.
According to economists this world is divided into developed, developing and underdeveloped nation. In one hand, we have developed nation where people have social security and basic aminities is taken for granted, on the other hand people for underdeveloped nation these basic aminities like food and education are luxuray. Tho tough the primary responsbility lies on government of underdeveloped country to provide basic aminities to the people, developed world must pitch in and work with govt hand in hand to help the poorest of the world.
If we look into the history, all underdeveloped countries were colonies of some developed world fifty years ago. Developed countries ruled in these underprivilged countries for centuries and used her resources in their own favour. For example: Britain mined silver and gold from Africa and used it for its own infrastructure development. Later after second world war when developed nation went into economical crisis, all colony countries freed up. However, they were left with no resources and support. Hence, we can see that these backward countries lagged behind becuase of a reason which invlolves wealthy nation. Therefore, it is responsbility of capable nations to come forward and help others who cannot afford.
This is primary responsbility of local government to provide food and education to it's citizen. Governing bodies should come up with innovative solutions to solve this grim problem. Government should have long term plan for human resource development. In addition, it can seek help of internationation organiaztions to define roadmap and long term plan to ensure food security and education for all. For example: - Government can loy out a plan for human development and seek loan from worldbank for development of infrastructure to support food and education security.
Finally, All the nations of the world are in same boat. It is outmost important and benefitial for humanity to have balanced growth across the world. Any disbalance for long term will eventually will effect others. For example: underdeveloped nation, in lack of sophisticated resources, can continue using methods which eventually will continue contributing to gloabl warming which will imapct whole world. Foremost, developed nation should come forward and share their humanity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 399, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...rld war when developed nation went into economical crisis, all colony countries freed up. ...
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Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'termed'.
Suggestion: termed
...im problem. Government should have long term plan for human resource development. In...
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Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...ance for long term will eventually will effect others. For example: underdeveloped nat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, however, if, look, second, so, therefore, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48324022346 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99603377351 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527932960894 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.1227035087 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.15 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143892162778 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531220789735 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429694415912 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928018732154 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0117449939601 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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