Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
in bygone days, the term abortion was not so much spread out and practised as in today's modern civilization. abortion is the practice of killing the baby inside mother's womb, there were some restriction and can only be practised in rare cases. i am in favour of legalizing the above mentioned practice. in further study i will be giving some points to elaborate my thoughts on this topic.
first and foremost, the cases of unwanted baby, the most common cases for abortion are because either of parents are not ready for the child but due to some unwanted circumstances had it.
secondly, the baby inside is not healthy as checked and prescribed by doctors, for instance, the baby has a lower heart rate as it should be or it has water in the brain or any other issues, in those cases it is better to loose it rather keeping and suffer for life .
As on the other hand, there are some scenarios, by which it becomes a controversial topic , as if just one of the parents want the child but other want it gone due any provided personal or family issue .
to conclude the above said points and in accordance of my opinion , i am in favour of legalizing abortion as it helps parents lead a better life for themselves as they can plan when is the right time to start family and for the unborn baby, if it is not healthy, so as to suffer and have problems in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44621513944 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45979591118 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537848605578 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.082180618 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.5 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.375 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191397347602 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807449222432 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333916558923 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961079350867 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461616554258 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.