Write about the following topic.
Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Today, abortion is one of the most rapidly growing problems wherein our society is divided into two parts. One who believe that it is the crime and others who want to accept it in a legalized way. Let us discuss both views and my opinion in subsequent paragraphs.
Those who are in favour to make abortion a legaly acceptable process, present an arguement that our society have still quite a few unresolved issues like rape, affordability and a choice to give the birth to a child. Moreover, severe child deficiency during preganacy is another key reason to adopt an abortion. No parents would want to give a birth to a deficient and severely diseased child that makes them and child to suffer life long. A known friend who was suffering in the preganancy with a child having conginetal heart defects appealed to a court with doctor's valid report indicating a life threat to child and a mother obtained a permission to follow an abortion.
On a contrary, a majority of people believe it is a crime and should be placed as punishable act under law. No one has a right to kill someone's right to live the life irrespective of the reason or a condition. How someone can murder a life? Moreover, they strictly opine that once abortion is accepted legaly, it will create far more adverse affectsthan what we are facing today particularly on the young generation. The wrong doing people will misuse a law and find the ways to escape from it. According to a survey, more than 70% of the total abortion are happening to the age of 17-24 which will further raise to an alarming level.
To Conclude, after discussing both views, I am in an opinion that abortion should be banned and by doing so, we are doing an holy act of saving an innocent life. However, an exception should be granted under a thorough evaluation and with the permission of law. Only Exception.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66261398176 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62847118738 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58358662614 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7404957006 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.266666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.13333333333 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19189085963 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557347628861 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425912164375 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116434233376 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359198573934 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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