Recently, many people know only a few of their neighbors. What is the cause of this problem? What can be done to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and any example from your own experience.
Nowadays, there are quite rare individuals who have interaction with their neighbors. The reasons behind this problem which act as catalysts are social media and long working hours. To improve interaction among neighbors, people should get involve with each other and arrange social gatherings time to time. This essay will discuss both reasons as well as solutions to curb this issue in subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, there are some factors because of which people do not take interest to know about their neighbors such as enormous usage of social sites and spend most of time at workplace. Firstly, these days, youngsters and adults spend most of their time on Facebook, twitter and so on rather than get involvement with nearby people in person. Consequently, it increases the gap between relations while person do not feel necessity to interact with neighborhood. In other words, according to recent research conducted by University of Toronto suggests in western countries only 10% people have interaction with their neighbors. In addition to social media, individuals are facing more workload and to complete their work they spend more hours at their workplaces and eventually they obtain very less time to contribute towards their family members. In this case, make healthy relations with neighbors seem impossible. Therefore, use of social sites and excessive work duration play as key factors for less involvement between neighbors.
To combat the problem of declining relationships between neighbors, individuals should take necessary measures. The first and foremost is to understand the importance of neighborhood, only then people will encourage to keep in touch with their neighbors. Although people believe their relatives and friends are more important; however, in the case of emergency, nearby people handle those circumstances more quickly than others. Thus, in order to know about neighbors, everyone should reduce the usage of Instagram, Facebook and many more sites where people prefer to talk with virtual friends; this time can be utilized to build relations with neighbors. Finally, people should arrange some social gatherings where they can meet and it will improve harmony between them. Also, some social clubs can provide opportunity to integrate people of same or different cast and creed. In short, the relationship between people in a society can be improved by decreasing excess use of social sites and participation in social events.
To conclude, While a growing number of people do not know about their neighbors because they find social media more appealing than personal contact and longer working hours, people should find time to build relations with them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
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Line 5, column 852, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ontribute towards their family members. In this case, make healthy relations with ...
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Line 9, column 217, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'keeping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: keeping
...orhood, only then people will encourage to keep in touch with their neighbors. Although...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, in addition, in short, such as, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2301.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 423.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43971631206 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68373892264 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51536643026 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 692.1 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5921182687 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.105263158 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2631578947 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26315789474 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179371406051 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660666092406 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352537691323 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122912883232 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466081456659 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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