You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
-tell him which team won
-describe the conditions on the day
-see how if you felt about the match.
Dear Ross,
hope you are recovering from your injuries and will join us soon. I am writing you to share news regarding the game our team played on sunday.
Let me explain the situation in more detail. As you know, the soccer match was scheduled to play with Barcelona team on last weekend. when match started our team was quite excited and within 15 minutes scored two goals and opposite team was having single goal. In the remaining time we tried hard to score; however, did not get success. Meanwhile, the player of other team got one more goal and both teams were on same points. The match was about to declare as a draw but surprisingly, Joy scored a goal in last minute and made our team won.
If I talk about the environment on the match day that was so lively. The audience showed great enthusiam and gallery was filled with cheering fans. Although the humidity was in the weather, it could not affect the excitement of people present there.
I really wished you were with us on that day. The moment when we hold winner trophy was amazing.
I can't wait to meet you in person. hope to see you soon and take good care of yourself.
regards
Chandler
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...ay with Barcelona team on last weekend. when match started our team was quite excite...
^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ast minute and made our team won. If I talk about the environment on the mat...
^^
Line 19, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... hold winner trophy was amazing. I cant wait to meet you in person. hope to see...
^^^^
Line 19, column 36, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hope
... I cant wait to meet you in person. hope to see you soon and take good care of y...
^^^^
Line 23, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Regards
...on and take good care of yourself. regards Chandler
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, regarding, so, thus, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58490566038 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19505415126 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650943396226 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4165444768 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.8 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1333333333 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25180683493 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809313263917 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830050134359 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134607466639 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627566554659 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.