You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.
1- Say where you think you left the papers.
2- Explain why they are so important
3- Tell the manager what you want him/her to do.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to you to seek your help to find my documents at your hotel. My name is Emma and I visited your hotel yesterday to attend a meeting with international delegates and when I arrived home, my file was not in my bag.
Let me explain the situation in more detail. I often visit your hotel regarding my business and on 24th september, 2019 also I was present there due to official work. The meeting was arranged in the conference hall in the basement because meeting room was not available owing to refurbishment work. In the meeting, I used podium to place my document file while discussing all the statistics through the slides. After completing the presentation, other members had to complete some documentation regarding new project so I got busy with them. Unfortunately, I completely forgot about my file and when I tried to find the same at home that was not available.
The transparent folder file is very essential for me because it contains all the information of new project as well as handout of company statistics. In addition to this, I need to mail scanned copy of those to overseas for further processing of project.
I would appreciate if you could ask your staff to find my file in the conference room. I am sure that will be on the podium. I will collect that in the tomorrow evening from the reception desk at your hotel.
I look forward to hear from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Emma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to you to seek ...
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Line 9, column 105, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'september 2019'.
Suggestion: september 2019
...hotel regarding my business and on 24th september, 2019 also I was present there due to officia...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 126, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
.... I am sure that will be on the podium. I will collect that in the tomorrow eveni...
^
Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...the reception desk at your hotel. I look forward to hear from you at your e...
^
Line 21, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...esk at your hotel. I look forward to hear from you at your earliest convenience. ...
^^^^^^^
Line 25, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iest convenience. Yours sincerely, Emma
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, so, well, while, as for, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 937.175257732 132% => OK
No of words: 259.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76833976834 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7925923218 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586872586873 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 380.7 290.88556701 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6227336624 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3333333333 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184617077652 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606474715027 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660518765681 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120247158328 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735642998109 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.